不知道如何提高口语?托福口语自查清单你用对了吗?!
2018 年 10 月 09 日
来源:朗播网
摘要:很多备考托福口语的同学常常觉得考试之前题刷了不少,怎么一到考场就说不出来满意的答案呢?相信很多同学都会有这样的困惑。你确定刷题的姿势正确吗?托福口语自查清单你用对了吗?
口语自查清单要进行 5 遍细致的答题,每一遍答题的侧重点是不一样的,这是一套针对考生过往口语习作的综合提升体系。认真执行这套体系,可以快速解决:
1. 跑题
2. 逻辑素材安排不当
3. 语言表达不准确
4. 文段字数过多或过少
5. 语音输出不地道
6. 呈现不自然
等以上问题。
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接下来让我们以 2016 年 11 月 5 日的托福口语 task 1 为例,一起学习一下自查清单的正确使用方式吧!
先回顾一下题目:
Which of the following technological developments have made the greatest impact on students' lives?
1. Online courses
2. Smart phones
3. E-book
拿到题目之后我们用 15 秒钟时间快速准备,模拟考场真实情况,进行**第一遍答题**:
**Claim**:Apparently, if you ask me I would say that online courses have made the greater impact on students’ lives than any other technology developments. Ok. Next,I will show my reasons.
**Reason 1**:First, it's of great flexibility and convenience. Students don't need to fit the curriculum schedule anymore, they can choose whatever subject they like and when to watch the lecture video. And they don't need to get up early to catch the bus or even spend time and money on commuting.
**Reason 2**:Besides, we can get massive great resource easily online. And we can choose the studying materials freely and the courses in which we are interested.
我们可以看出第一遍的文章还是存在很多逻辑和语法的问题的,接下来,我们要开始进行第二遍的修改,即**缕清思路,升级词汇,修改句型,更正语法错误**。
**第二遍答题**:
**Claim** :Apparently, online courses have made the greatest impact on students’ lives. (修正一稿中的比较级结构,开篇不说废话,去掉 if you ask me……这类的无用表达,**直接表明观点**。)
**Reason 1**: First, it's of great flexibility and convenience. Students can access their courses at any time, from anywhere they can log on, in most cases. And they don't need to get up early to catch the bus or even spend time and money on commuting. (修改一稿中的**重复表达**,后面的句子要突出表现 flexibility 和 convenience 这两个特点。)
**Reason 2**: Besides, online courses provide a wide range of options. Students may be able to choose from a wider breadth of degree programs.(第二个理由重点突出网络课程可以给学生们提供更多的选择,所以这里可以替换掉 we can get massive great resource easily online,一稿中的这句话还是偏向于体现 convenience 这一特点,如此修改可以**使逻辑更严密**。)
通过修改我们把基本的语法错误消灭掉,也替换了一些中式表达,在接下来的第三遍修改中,我们的目标是**答好**,可以更**高效率的点题**,补充一些例子。在录音时注意重音的位置。
**第三遍答题**:
**Claim** :I must say that online courses totally changed the way we study.(**升级句型**,不仅选择出 online courses,更清楚地表达出 greatest impact on students’ lives 的具体内容是什么,即 changed the way we study。)
**Reason 1**: First, it's of great flexibility and convenience. Students can access their courses at any time, from anywhere they can log on, in most cases. They don't need to get up early to catch the bus or even spend time and money on commuting.
**Evidence 1** :For example, my brother enrolled in a cryptograph class on Coursera, which allows him to work during daytime and learn in the evening.(**补充例子**,使原因部分更有说服力,内容更充实丰满。)
**Reason 2**: Besides, online courses provide a wide range of options. Students may be able to choose from a wider breadth of degree programs.
**Evidence 2** :Some online colleges offer degree programs that might not yet be available in nearby public or private institutions. (**补充例子**,使原因部分更有说服力,内容更充实丰满。)
看到这里,很多同学一定明白了好的文章是一点一点修改出来的,当我们把这个题答好之后,接下来就是拿着“剧本”进入熟读背诵和表演的环节了。
**第四遍答题**时,同学们要看着自己的笔记,清晰,良好,可以控制节奏地**按时间完成录音**。录音完成之后同学们要重听并认真分析,看看自己的发音是否正确,重音、停顿、连读以及语调等是不是正确了。
**第五遍答题**,我们的目标是要**记住**。即使**不看笔记,不计时**也可以完成答题。把本次答案当做是自己熟悉的知识背景,并且以后可以随时调用的素材。有余力的同学可以根据自己的习惯进行一定程度的**“表演”**,让自己的答案更像是现场临时想出来的。坚持这样练下去,假以时日,同学们就会发现自己的嘴皮子变溜了,对素材的迁移应用能力也变强了。
(同学们可以参考下方录音)
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口语自查清单的使用方法你 Get 到了吗?这里小编提醒大家,会用托福口语自查清单的小伙伴有很多,但是坚持每道题目这样练下来的却是凤毛麟角了,所以如果你这样认真执行了,你就离成功更进一步啦~~