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2016年10月28日托福独立写作范文解析:抚养孩子

2019 年 05 月 22 日 来源:朗播网

摘要:2016年10月28日托福独立写作的题目是:你是否同意以下观点?和 50 年前相比,现在的父母抚养孩子更容易。下面给出朗播老师出品的写作范文,希望能对大家准备托福写作有所启发。
2016年10月28日托福独立写作的题目是:你是否同意以下观点?和 50 年前相比,现在的父母抚养孩子更容易。下面给出朗播老师出品的写作范文,希望能对大家准备托福写作有所启发。 ## 2016年10月28日托福独立写作题目 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier for parents to raise children than it was 50 years ago. ## 2016年10月28日托福独立写作范文 Nurturing children is always a difficult task for every parents. It not only takes time, but also money, as well as parents’ love and full attention. Whereas, some people argue that due to the great changes in our society, it’s much easier for parents to raise children than it was half a decade ago. Personally speaking, I do not agree with it. This point of view can be well-supported by following reasons and examples. First of all, parents are exposed to a much more stressful environment when it comes to children’s education. Compared to 50 years ago when parents just let children have fun with their friends in the playground after school or at weekends, parents today have to choose carefully which extracurricular activities their children should take part in. It is the general social trend that fuels parents’ desire for their children to stand out from the crowd. A nationwide statistic report conducted by the education department reveals that because of the pressure from other parents, nowadays over 80 percent of the parents in China tend to send their children to afterschool math, English, and other various kinds of classes. Additionally, various potential health risks also leave parents today in a constant alerted state than it was 50 years ago. The abundance of materials and the improvement of living standard also lead to some problems, such as the fake imported products or even substandard vaccines. In order to make sure that their children grow up safely, parents need to remain vigilant all the time and spend more money on buying products with good quality. The reports of poisoned milk powder and fake vaccine has shocked most parents in China. My sister, who has a two-year old boy, told me that she might consider to take her kid to vaccinate in Hong Kong. It cannot be denied that raising children half a decade ago was also hard due to the scarcity of materials. Parents had to sew clothes for their children, and gave meat to their children rather than ate it themselves. However, the pressure at that time is relatively lower, what parents need to do is only earning as much money as possible. To sum up, I disagree with the statement that raising children today is an easier task for parents than it was 50 years ago, for the stressful environment in education and potential health risks require parents to pay more attention to their children. ## 范文思路 你是否同意以下观点?和 50 年前相比,现在的父母抚养孩子更容易。 开头段:不同意。 中间段 1:和 50 年前相比,在教育方面,父母面临的压力更大。 中间段 2:和 50 年前相比,各种潜在的健康风险也让如今的父母时刻处于警惕状态。 让步段:不可否认,由于物质匮乏,50 年前抚养孩子也很困难。父母省吃俭用,把吃的穿的都留给孩子。然而,那时的压力相对较低,父母所需要做的只是赚尽可能多的钱。 结尾段:综上所述,我不同意现在的父母抚养孩子更容易。 ## 范文高分表达 1. extracurricular activities:课外活动 2. stand out from the crowd:脱颖而出 3. substandard vaccines:不合格的疫苗 4. poisoned milk powder:毒奶粉 5. sew clothes: 缝衣服
以上就是2016年10月28日托福独立写作范文之抚养孩子的全部内容,大家可以看到上面范文中的逻辑可是非常严谨呢,这样严谨的逻辑是要通过英文写作才能得来的,所以大家赶快动手练练吧。

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