2018年6月30日托福独立写作范文解析：高远目标

## 2018年6月30托福独立写作题目 你是否同意以下观点，人们应该制定高远的目标，而不是现实的目标？ ## 2018年6月30日托福独立写作范文 Life is an experience of setting goals and achieving them. Some people work hard to pursue ambitious goals while others devote to realistic ones. Then, which goal setting makes more sense for modern people? This question has aroused a heated debate in society recently. As far as I am concerned, we should set our goals as high as possible in order to achieve the best result. I am going to elaborate this viewpoint in the following paragraphs. For individuals, the higher the goal is, the better the result will be. It is because there is always a gap between reality and dream. Higher goals can galvanize people to push to the limit and achieve more. Instead, aiming at realistic goals, people are more likely to produce results less than they expect. For example, when I was in high school, my father usually encouraged me to set the goal of a test score beyond my ability, so that I would force myself to work harder every time to get closer to that goal. Thanks to my father’s strategy, my test score was always far above my expectation. For all mankind, ambitious goals allow human beings to boldly explore the boundaries where no one has ever been before. Without audacious dreams, the world would not have been what it is today. It is those “unrealistic” dreams that drive human beings to break new ground and make new breakthroughs all the time. Jack Ma, probably the most famous Chinese businessman, once proposed that he wanted to build an e-commerce platform for all merchants to do business, but at that time he was just considered nothing but a guy talking idiotic nonsense. If Jack Ma had not set such a goal, there would not have been Alibaba, a great company changing the lives of millions. Admittedly, I am not denying the advantages of realistic goals. Compared to ambitious ones, realistic goals are more attainable and less stressful. However, the obsession with realistic goals will make people short-sighted, reducing their possibility to think out of the box and get what is out of their reach. In this sense, people with ambitious goals are inclined to make a significant success. In summary, it is more meaningful for people to follow ambitious goals rather than realistic ones. I am a big fan of a movie, Turbo, in which a line has left me a deep impression: No dream is too big, and no dreamer is too small. Thus, let’s never be stingy about our dreams. Make them big and make them happen. ## 范文思路 这道题问：你是否同意以下观点，人们应该制定高远的目标，而不是现实的目标？ 开头段：同意题目观点，即人们应该追求高远的目标。 中间段1：对个人而言，目标定得越远，结果就越好。 中间段2：对全人类而言，高远的目标让人们敢于挑战未知，突破极限，实现跨越式发展。 让步段：当然，不是说现实的目标就没有价值，因为现实的目标比较容易实现，人们更愿意努力去实现，但是现实目标通常比较短视，人们无法突破自己的极限而实现更大的可能性。 结尾段：综上所述，我认为人们应该追求高远的目标，因为对个人和全人类而言，都是有利的。 ## 范文高分表达 1. devote to: 致力于(to dedicate yourself to a cause or a person) 2. make sense: 有意义（be intelligible, justifiable, or practicable） 3. aim at: 目的在于（the act of aiming or directing anything at or toward a particular point or target） 4. break new ground: 打破陈规（do something innovative that is considered an advance or positive benefit） 5. think out of the box: 跳出思维的限制（to think in a different, innovative, or original manner） 6. in this sense: 从这个意义上说（to distinguish between two possible senses of a word or phrase）