2018年11月17日托福独立写作范文解析：影响友谊的因素

## 2018年11月17日托福独立写作题目 The most important factor that affects the lasting time of friendship. 1. always help each other 2. have same interests and views on important things 3. trust each other completely ## 2018年11月17日托福独立写作范文 A life-long friendship is sought after by almost everyone in the world, which raises a question: how can we find one? There is no accurate answer to this query since there exist numerous factors contributing to a high-quality and lifetime friendship. One opinion believes that trust is the foundational building block of a friendly relationship, and I get hold of a similar idea. The following paragraphs will further discuss this perspective. First of all, misunderstandings are usually inevitable, and trust is able to squash all kinds of rumors and bring two friends together as close as they always have been. Gossips may come from thin air but carry the devastating power to drive two people apart. Faith shared between two soulmates will make any rumor seem ridiculous and disappear. For instance, one day in college, I was told by a classmate that the reason why my boyfriend broke up with me was he was seeing my best friend at that time. I didn’t believe a word of it because I supposed she would never do things like that. As a result, we still hang out a lot even many years after graduation, and that rumor has caused nothing unpleasant between us. Plus, trust makes it possible to reveal your deepest secrets to your friend, so that you can receive comfort and support from the other person to pull through the darkest days. Friendship is often associated with codependency and responsibility. Without trust, doubt on possible betrayal will arise and one may never fully rely on another person. Take my favorite band’s lead singer‘s story as an example. He recently revealed to the press that in his early 20s, he was suffering from grave depression and substance abuse problems. Fortunately, he turned to a friend for help, who was safe for him to let out everything and kept his secrets all the time. Thanks to the singer’s trust, they have been in a close relationship for decades and probably will still be for the rest of their lives. He said he would always appreciate what his friend did for him during that time. Of course, the other two options also play a vital role in determining the lasting time of a friendship. However, always helping each other sometimes can be impractical because there will sooner or later be situations where you are unable to help. Besides, sharing similar passions do not warrant a complete friendship. People you can hang out with are not necessarily who you can count on. The connotation of friendship lies beyond same interests or views. In a word, trust is the biggest contributor to a healthy and long-lasting friendship out of these three factors, for it could preempt harm brought by gossips and eliminate all barriers between two souls. ## 范文思路 这道题问：你认为影响友谊持久最重要的因素是以下哪项呢？1.互帮互助；2.对重要的事情有一致的看法，有相同的兴趣；3.完全信任彼此。 开头段：我认为信任是影响友谊持久最重要的因素。 中间段 1：误解通常是不可避免的，朋友间的信任能够粉碎各种谣言，让两个人像往常一样亲密。 中间段 2：如果两个互相信任，你可以和你的朋友诉说你的秘密和困惑，并从对方那里得到安慰和支持，帮助自己度过不开心的日子。 让步段：当然，其他两项也对友谊的持久有很大的影响。然而，总是互相帮助有时是不切实际的，因为迟早会遇到你帮不上忙的情况。此外，拥有相同的爱好并不能保证拥有完美的友谊。和你一起出去玩的人不一定是你可以信赖的人。 结尾段：综上所述，我认为信任是影响友谊持久最重要的因素。 ## 范文高分表达 1. come from thin air：凭空产生 2. pull through：渡过难关 3. drive two people apart：把两人分开，两人渐行渐远 4. break up with sb.：和某人分手 5. play a vital role：起关键作用