剑桥雅思13Test4大作文范文解析：我们怎样解决挨饿问题

## 题目 In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? 题型：问题解决 翻译：尽管农业取得了进步，但世界上许多人仍然挨饿。为什么会这样？关于这个问题可以做些什么？ ## 写作结构 开头段：背景引入+话题介绍 主体段 1：可能造成问题的原因1 主体段 2：可能造成问题的原因2 结尾段：解决的措施 ## 范文解析 ### 开头段 交代背景“现代农业技术取得了巨大进步，然而仍然有许多人在与饥饿作斗争”，表示“将探讨问题的原因并提供一些参考解决方案”。 背景句：The modern agricultural technology has made huge progress and contributed to the diet of the world’s population. However, there are still numerous people struggling against starvation. 话题介绍：The following passage will explore the reasons of the worldwide issue and offer some solutions for reference. ### 主体段 1 原因之一是较贫穷的国家无法负担设施或获得技术，也没有足够的熟练劳动力为农业产业做出贡献。 主题句：Currently, advanced agricultural technology is still exclusive to the developed world and a limited number of the developing nations but inaccessible to many economically disadvantaged countries. 平行列举+递进分析：The poorer countries are unable to afford the facilities or to acquire the techniques, nor do they have sufficient skilled labour to contribute to the agricultural industry. Therefore, despite the scientific and economic value of advanced agricultural technology, it hasn’t truly benefited citizens from the disadvantaged regions. ### 主体段 2 原因之二是缺乏稳定和强大的政治，经济和社会环境，这是研究和发展国家农业技术所必需的。 主题句：Another trigger for the worldwide starvation is the absence of a stable and robust political, economic and social environment which is required to research and develop a country’s agricultural technology. 平行列举+递进分析：While those suffering from long-term poverty and war can’t provide strong financial support or attract skilled workforce, which makes it difficult to maintain a healthy and sustainable social and economic environment for any industrial development. Therefore, it’s urgent for the international community to help financially disadvantaged regions improve their social, economic and educational conditions by joint efforts. ### 结尾段 解决措施：应限制战争和冲突的负面影响，为技术和产业发展创造健康和可持续的经济和社会环境。此外，更多的政府资金应投入高等教育，以提高公民的学历。 Nevertheless, several solutions could be considered to improve this situation. First, the negative impacts of warfare and conflicts should be limited to create a healthy and sustainable economic and social environment for technology and industry development. Furthermore, more government fund should be invested into higher education to improve the academic qualification of citizens, which is an indispensable prerequisite for increasing the number of skilled workforce who can accomplish the application of advanced agricultural technology. ## 重点表达 contribute to 贡献 the absence of ...的缺乏 it’s urgent for... to do... 做...是紧急的